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. mask .
hoity-toity wealth
air-borne
scattered earthward
withdrawal
at daggers drawn
beguiled youth
amiss
injected plague
cut and run
smeared sheets
iffy
enveloped about
vacant simper
infra-
mask
dear
and too
near …
bulging popsy
being
within without
red-handed
blade
dwelling styx
callow soldier
fabricated
training sanctified
passing
into aurora
blemished rose
ebb
tarrying still
memento
boon aspiration
dear
and too
near …
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what i find really interesting about this poem is that with some of your choices of words and the rhythm.. it seems almost childlike.. 'hoity-toity', 'iffy', 'bulging popsy' etc... over all it reminded me of something that would be a child's nursery rhyme or song.. and yet there is something darker or possibly even sinister that undercuts that...
it definitely makes me want to read more of your poetry..
it definitely makes me want to read more of your poetry..